I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, June 15, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Connor,
ReplyDeleteAwesome effort at finishing this piece of work 😊
Looking great!
sup connor nice job it was cool the socer sweet to funny from brooklyn
ReplyDeletehi Connor i really like the way that you add the characters in the game. next time you can add guns. By Ethanmiel.
ReplyDeleteHi Connor! I am Tyler from South Hornby School. I like your pick a path, but maybe you could add a lil bit more? And work on the punctuation?
ReplyDeleteFrom Tyler :)
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ReplyDeletegood job connor i like the effort that you put into it.
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ReplyDeleteHello connor this looks nice NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE less go less go less go
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